a bit about me

Imagine this — Your firm is preparing its response to a very important RFP from a very attractive (potential) client, and there’s a problem. The attorneys writing the response honestly believe it should be as formal and wordy as can be. But you know the client doesn’t want attorneys who do what they like rather than what the client wants. Quite the opposite.

So . . . who am I?

I’m the skilled and experienced editor who helps you craft a proposal that makes the right impression — it not only says your firm does what the client wants, it demonstrates it.

what else

My name: it really is Mister Thorne. So I go by my last name.

Call me Thorne.

Here’s the story.